

I like the technique - I'm not sure this was the best subject for it. As always, all critiques are appreciated.
One day later - I "uncentered" the flower, and I didn't have a bee, but I added a ladybug. Hope that makes it better.
A gallery of the quilts created for the Fast Friday Fabric Challenges. The quilt artists display their work here to give and receive constructive critiques. Only blog members may comment.
2. Explain what the piece communicates to you.
3. Give a 'what if' statement(What if you had used blue instead of red?)
10 comments:
Katie, a bright lively piece. Certainly depicts the color of nature, very nice.
Katie.... a flower is a perfect subject for radial symmetry.... now what would have happened if you had more than a single petal? I think that would add some depth. Another idea would be to crop this and reduce the negative space so its not just so out there.... I think you've got a great start on an exiting piece!
Hi Katie, this is very striking with the gorgeous clors and fabrics. Would you consider cropping it? I think it would be more interesting if the flower were not dead center. I would take all but 1/2" off the left and bottom and maybe add a few bees buzzing on the right.
Nice work!
Cynthia
Cropping is an exellent idea. Maybe it will make it more interesting. Don't know why I didn't think of that myself. Thanks for the suggestions!
Katie, I really like the changes you made to this. Your eye travels around the piece now and enjoys the lively color you have used. Your hand-dyed fabrics are wonderful. Very cute lady bug too.
Hi Katie, Well, the cropping turned out great...makes it look more unpredicable and artistic. I think the bug probably would be more effective if it were more contrasting in color and value. Just looking at the color/value contrasts of the whole piece...I see one center point of bright yellow. It could work to balance that with 2-3 other bright/light spots elsewhere on the piece, probably on the background rather than on the flower itself. Just a couple thoughts...what you have already done makes it more interesting.
Cynthia
PS I really like your quilting design on this piece...it uses echo quilting in a more interesting way!
Love the colors you've used, Katie. The light seems to be striking on one side of the flower and beyond as well. I agree to cropping somehow so it doesn't appear to be just dropped in the middle of a pond of water. Add some leaves maybe that go off the edge if you don't want to crop the flower any?
Thanks for all the suggestions. I think it's a little better now...I'll stop there and remember the lessons for next time. I appreciate the feedback very much!
Hey Katie.. this is so cool.. I love your reverse applique...very effective rendition of the Challenge.
And, yes, the cropping does make a difference.
Very pretty Katie. I like the cropped version, too, and the colors are striking.
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